L.A. Confidential

1. The initial hook-Does the work have an arresting introduction?

Manczur:   1

Ormosi:     1

Thurlow:    1

 

2. Was the work tonally consistent throughout?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

3. Was the work effective within its genre, addressing its themes well?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

4. Did the work achieve its goal(s) by its end?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

5. Was the antagonist effective/appropriate/memorable?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

6. Were the main character(s) effective/appropriate/memorable?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:    1

    

7. Was the supporting cast effective/appropriate/memorable?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

8. Was the dialogue effective/appropriate/memorable?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1

Thurlow:     1

 

9. Did the work maintain an acceptable level of immersion?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1    

Thurlow:     1

 

10. Overall, was the work enjoyable, is it recommended?

Manczur:    1

Ormosi:      1    

Thurlow:     1

 

J Ian Manczur’s Total:         10

Steven Ormosi’s Total:       10

Scott Thurlow’s Total:         10

Aggregate score:               10

 

8/26/15